Tuesday, 6 April 2010

Script Ajustments

After experimenting with the original script, we discovered that the voice-over would last considerably longer than we had intended for it to and as a result of this were left with 2 options:

The first being to leave the monologue out entirely and just use musical accompaniment with the film, but we felt that our audiences would not learn enough about out character without the interior monologue voice-over to expand upon the character or DAN.

We therfore had to consider the option which was to shorten the script in order to it to fit the footage better.

This is our final, re-amended version of the script, that can be seen in the final version of our film opening:

DAN: How do you get your kicks? Some will choose the easy way out of the shitty existance we've imposed upon ourselves. Waking up everyday at 6.30, to get the tube with a load of cognoscenti bastards, accept their place in the nostalgia of office life, take their orders from some big shot fucking cunt in a shirt and tie, then go back to the 2 bedroom, 1 bathroom semi-detatched shit hole in the middle of 'no-wheres-ville'. Fuck that for a laugh. It's about life, it's about football, it's about the carnage that comes with it. The broken knuckles, chipped teeth, covered in claret -it comes from within. You either have it, or you fuck off.

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